the brand of the sushi by using Illustrator

I designed the sushi by using shapes tool including rectangle and circle as i wanted to creat sushi by using all the shapes 

The illustration is inspired by this picture in term of ingredients inside the sushi and colour 

As you can see sushi includes seaweed (green) and orange ,green and red 

source lazycatkitchen

I have chosen pink as I have never seen any sushi packaging is pink.Pink sushi packaging will attract customers attention and pink represents Kawaii culture which refers to cute culture (according to my contextual knowledge as Japanese culture plays a crucial role in Asia society including This society). When i think of Japan i would think of Japanese culture. 

I have added Japanese words which means have a nice meal. Chopstick is commonly used for sushi so i have to included.Mark dislike this overall appearance as it is too much.He suggested me to remove some sushi. 

I have made it more simple as less is more.Also, the word sushi is big and appear to be more 3D to capture readers attention.  Please feel free to comment your thoughts this piece of work.